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Who Am I by ~Swordexpert:iconSwordexpert:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Typographical


I have been with you for years
And in those years I’ve learned this
That everything that you’ve ever said or done
Is something I’ve tried to help you with

I’ve watched you become
The person you are today
Seen the many struggles
That has been bestowed upon you

And yet you grow…

Like magic trapped inside your soul
You never cease to amaze me
In ways that I can not describe
I have no reason to ever doubt you

You listen to me and take my advice
But sometimes I prefer your ways

Better than mine…

And I can surely live with that
Because I am happy that you have
Such a brilliant mind,
For someone that’s still so young

So young, but so bright!

So.. I have but one question for you
And I’m sure you’ll get it right…
I'll have faith in you for always,
But the question is


Who Am I?
©2005-2009 ~Swordexpert
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Author's Comments

Who am I? Is about.. well... how about I let you all figure it out. See who gets it right first. The person telling the story through this poem could be many "things" (haha I said things cause I dont want to give it away.

enjoy. and comment.


think outside the box people.

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~carded-reality Feb 7, 2005, 7:30:34 PM
ahh great poem Alisha! I enjoyed reading it and how i thought of so many different things it could be.
Higher power, spirit/soul, inner child, actually yourself, friend, lover, parent ect.

But as for who it is... My answer will be a simple one.. Everything... Past, present, and future people, and inanimate objects like a teady bear. :)
Not very orriginal of me, but that is what i've got. :P
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~Naomi-Wiflath Feb 7, 2005, 7:54:27 PM
Beatuiful. I have nothing more to say then that.

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But then we fall back now to this empty house,
There the wars will rage.

Love has no gender
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~realPhixion Feb 7, 2005, 8:02:37 PM
Thats a pretty cool riddle-poem. Hmm...get back to you if i figure it out. For first-glance thoughts, i think conscience, mother, father, boyfriend. i think that it could also be yourself, in the future, looking back at you in awe. oh well, just a thought...
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~Swordexpert Feb 8, 2005, 5:40:34 AM
well you got one of them right. Try to guess which one you got right out of conscience, mother, father, boyfriend, yourself and maybe I will tell you.

Thx for the comment. Glad you liked it. :hug:

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~Swordexpert Feb 8, 2005, 5:43:18 AM
I am glad that you liked it so much Holly. And I like that you guessed on what I was talking about. I love seeing what other people believe it is about. Although I must say, you were rather close, but no goal. ;)

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~ladydracostra Feb 8, 2005, 11:37:51 AM
Beautiful poem. I'm going to take a guess and say it's your conscience. It goes everywhere with you and knows everything you do, even though you don't always listen to it.

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If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh; otherwise, they'll kill you.

~Oscar Wilde
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~carded-reality Feb 8, 2005, 11:49:23 AM
hey close but no goal is better then not even aiming nor trying. :)
I hope you're doing well.
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~Swordexpert Feb 8, 2005, 12:58:21 PM
awesome. You're very right indeed! Glad you figured it out first try. lol... thx for the comment

:D

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~Swordexpert Feb 8, 2005, 1:04:48 PM
I am doing awesome Holly. How have you been lately? I havent been on msn because the stupid piece of shit is broken or something lol... so anyways whats been up with you? :)

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